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Through the use of a magic scroll, an unpopular girl summons a powerful god in order to obtain love, popularity, and revenge.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.57
- BE: 3.71
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.71
Petsinwinter
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
That chapter ending seemed a little abrupt.
EmpathicApathy
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent, cant wait for #2
Pleasure
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well done ! I liked the story, the way you present it, the way it unfolds. Great descriptions, do keep going !
razaksroughnecks
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great job! I really enjoyed this one. It was well paced, well written, and seems like it has the potential for a lot of chapters. I can't wait for the next one!
Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great writing, great story. However...we obviously need eight more contributions to the story. And here's a thought - why do all of them have to start out as female? How about a bit of transformation?
kidrocker151
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Good story, better if you continue it
LateNightSurfer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A properly formatted text that's not littered with mistakes - how rare in this day and age ;) Interesting story idea, though I just couldn't warm up that much to the characters. A matter of personal preference, not a fault of the author! Waiting for the next part.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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