Harley Quinn, mistress of the crime prince in Gotham, finds a curious chemical. Results ensue...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 5.00
Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
'ello author of the HQ story, good job. There needs to be more written on this ironic yet funny villaness. The story itself seemed a tad off for her character, but the expansion wasn't half bad. If anything needs work, it's the prequel, or entry into the expansion. Your story seemed to be much like a firework, so much buildup, a spark, then off to the next, so to speak.
Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I liked it. If I have to offer constructive criticism, I'll say that it was too short. I look forward to more if you decide to continue.
Frank
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the better stories I've read here. Truly great work. If you had any doubts about making a sequel, let 'em go. Do want more.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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