The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

WestSide
A Terrible Change, Chapters 1- 7
Average Scores:

anything
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

i liked the realistic side to it, please write more like this!

matt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very enjoyable, I cannot wait to see where this goes.

novastorm76
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Most disappointing

Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Glad to see you are contining the story.

o;ejkl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

If you're having trouble opening it like I did, change the .rtf to .txt. Your WP will open it but still read it as a .rtf

Duuude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely great! Can't wait for the next installment!

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