Sadie finds that her family history is a little more interesting than she thought when she discovers her great gram's diary in the farmstead attic. Turns out she was a witch! Sadie masters the first spells, but the very last spell on the very page turns out to be much more powerful than she and her friends bargained for...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.80
Chido
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well done.
I liked the twists & turns of the story.
Surprises are a nice change of pace.
astromon9021
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
good grammar but the shemale... it truly sickens me you should have put a warning tag
tusdine
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I didn't care for the female penis growth but otherwise another excellent story. Please keep writing them!
wldwstadvntr
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One word: Yes!
You have done it again. I am a HUGE (pun intended) fan!
Blamandude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Just when June can't get any better you post ANOTHER story.
Good variety of changes, I am kind of relieved there wasn't huge fat growth.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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