The Overflowing Bra

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Honestly, not bad news!...

bIzSuD Thanks for the article! I hope the author does not mind if I use it for my course work!...

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I'm sorry about the  errors. I would do this on the forum but the bot seems to think the US has other than 50 states, and won't let me join. Fifty errors? I can't find that many, even if you count double spaces. Could you show me?
Milkmaid

More than 50 goofs, the funniest being diary, which is not a dairy (cow farm).  As someone has said, all of a sudden Ms Cow has 600 pound udders, but we don't get to find out the in-between where she grew to that size.  So remember, more BE.

Good story!  Size is great, but this idea - a woman becoming a real-life human cow - is terrific.  Of course I'd like to see more detail, but this was a good concept, well-developed, and well-written.  Please, how about another chapter in our huge beauty's life?  With more description of her bulk and weight and how they affect her?  Thanks again for a great story.

I think milkmaid might benefit from hopping over to the Overflowing Forum and asking for someone to proofread.
Cow-i-fication is admittedly one of my hot buttons, but this story was missing out on a lot, especially toward the end. Eventually, those udders are going to get too big for her to handle things like buying food and dildoes, as well as selling her milk. Does someone look after her needs? Does she stay in her apartment, or is she forced to move into a milking stall in a barn?
There are questions which need answering, and answering those questions has the potential to make this story scorching hot if done correctly.

I am now dumber, having read that story.

Grammar is a bit rushed, but we're not exactly critics of high society here. I hope to see more writings along this line of thought.

This was going along so well...so hot....then bam! the end.  the sudden 300 lbs. breasts.  Go slower.  You were telling a story of this woman's life.  Now give her a conflict, finding a boyfriend, telling her family, something and watch her work through it.  Not a bad first start though, especially for what has been an overused concept on this site.

Some spelling, grammatical errors and misplaced words ("me" instead of "my").
Apart from that a decent first attempt. It could do with more descriptions of the growth, that would add a bit to the depth of the story. Or maybe a bit more personality for the protagonist.

Somehow, this one almost managed to come off as depressing.  

Please make this the start of a series.
Cause it can't stand very well on it's own.

Spell checker is your friend.
Great story, just too short.  More in depth descriptions of growth and her reactions to it.  Also, some character development and build the story slower.  Slow and steady progression of the plot makes a classic.
Looking forward to other works.

I liked the idea of it! Could go a few different ways, it simply lacks the depth and descriptions needed to become a classic. Feel free to get some tips and suggestions from the forum/other sites. And with that, keep em coming!

Not bad for a first try. Short, and to the point. Needs some major tweaking, though - check the grammar, the punctuation, watch for double blanks, all the usual stuff associated with writing.