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The Overflowing Bra

one_eyed_jack
Twins, part 2
In a world of superheroes, Tracy is hypnotized by a supervillian, but that won't stop her from finally beginning to enjoy her own powers.. +Thanks for any comments.+
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Anonymous Coward
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A well-written, fun, and sexy story. Thanks!

cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Very exciting. I especially liked the part in her condo. Incredible.

harl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

really a great story. I like the twist taken by the plot. anxious to get part three...

Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Pure awesome. Do want more.

Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

You ended this with the statement "This was deffinately going to be fun". I couldn't agree more. Great job and nice descriptions. Looking forward to the next installment.

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