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CBA 2 - How to Micaela the perfect omelette
The second story in the CBA universe. For every good man their is a sexy, beutiful and absolutely sex driven mad concubine behind them. Worse than the illuminati and every secret society out there, these men want their omelettes...

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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I thought it was a little rushed, and the whole six arms thing was a turn-off. The ending wasn't bad, though.

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