Terah decides she wants to change parts of her body with her new found wealth. Decent length story with a lot of action.
[note]Upped by apple
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 4.00
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This story was excellent! It seems too convenient, though, that Tarah's cousin died and left her exactly $5 million.
Kam
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Its an okay story, could really benefit from a re-read/revision. The descriptions aren't that bad, but fairly brief. Also there is practically no character development to be had. In a story this length, it makes it hard to get into the minds of the characters when they are so static.
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Found this elsewares on the internets, Don't believe its here. At least not under the same title.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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