Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.87
- BE: 1.73
- Characters: 1.67
- Technical: 1.73
Very Free
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I've never seen Microsloth Works on the machines on which I've installed XP. But whatever, it was unreadable on my machine so it gets a zero. Oh, wait, can't do that. Okay, a 1.
Tennek
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
you need to use Txt, RTF, or Doc formats when saving a story, because I missed half of it due to not being able to read it.
Viewer
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
i found the BE description lacking and the story could of been abit longer, and plz use ether .txt or word for stories here
but you had a interesting plot, that into consideration of our advise into your next work
addy
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Not worth the 20mins to convert it.
Sorry to be harsh, but there was close to zero character development, gross errors in grammar, no plot development, nothing at all to save this (even if it had been in a readable format).
Please rewrite from scratch and try again!
soylent
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Couldn't read it and I'm not going to bother installing another application just for one story here. Use txt, rtf, doc, html, something everyone can read without additional software (like every other story here). The application used for this (works or *gasp* word perfect) can save the file in one of the formats listed. Do it. Also might want to consider putting a description on the story post as well.
Groblek
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Yet another voice for the "Use a format we can read" crowd.
pissed off
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
PLEASE get a modern, standard wordprocessor and use it! Or even just Wordpad. WPS files are IMPOSSIBLE for most people to open, as MS Works is very rare.
Leviathan
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
rw
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Please download and install open office, It is free and you can post in most formats including .doc(word) .pdf(acrobat).
If you insist on using MS Works then please save as a .RTF(rich text file)
mtb
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I find it hard to believe that Apple systems would ship a microsoft product out the gate.
Oh, wait. They don't.
godofwar5000
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Microsoft works comes standard with most computers nowadays. But .doc or .txt would have been preferred. Story wise, interesting, liked the concept, a little underdeveloped, but it got the job done. Decent work sir.
annoyed
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
how about .txt or .doc not word perfect not everyone uses that crap
breastlvr
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
How about re-posting this in .doc format so everyone can read it?
buddyu
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Overall I enjoied the story. It could have been longer in my opinion.
mtb
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
How about putting this in a format everyone can read, guy?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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