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The Overflowing Bra

Xodin
masterxodin@yahoo.com
Helia Christmas Poem
A christmas tribute to Helia Melonowski that I've written in poetic form.

While waiting up for Santa Helia drinks some magical eggnog and becomes her own best present.
Average Scores:
 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Funny and sexy! Great job. I, too, enjoyed the nookie line. A woman who can lactate egg nog is genius!
 Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Quite a funny story. The "nookie" line made me laugh. Good job!
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