The Overflowing Bra

A nice, quick, hot read.  Perhaps more adventures of the boob fairy in the future?

very good, I was into the story

very to the point and brief. pushed the right buttons, however, and that's what really matters. this is good for the instant-gratification, even if it was almost too short..

Obviously character development is not the main focus in a story like this but it was quite enjoyable.

Think about engaging the other sense a little furster. Smells and sound. Good premise that led into it, but you could do a littl emore with her journey over to the nieghbors house and a stronger finish. Good stuff - I look forward to more.

Not bad, but the BE seemed to drop off around halfway in. Descriptions afterwards were scarse and, generally, simply not there.
Not that bad, but could be better.

Great stuff. Good reasoning behind the story, nice descriptions.
Please can we have more description of sex and longer stories.

I echo Kanodin's comments 100 percent.  Twas a pleasure to read; I only wish it wasn't so short.  This author has a way with words that I wish I had, and it seems that it has made sms so jealous that he/she had to call it "absolute garbage".  I'd be ecstatic to read a much longer version of this BE story.  Just don't rush the BE descriptions, and keep it free.  I'd gladly pay, though..  It's worth it!  ;-)

Strong writing and a good style:  just needed more description and some extra story length.  It really felt like it ended far too soon.

To echo Kanodin, an excelent example of a short story. The characters were wonderful, and well described. I would like to see it be a bit longer, but it is a short story, and as such, no complaints. Please write more!

absolute garbage

I rarely read a story that is as pleasurable to read as it is to know the story. I would argue, and I do not think that I am alone on this point, that the story's prose stands apart from the usual BE fare, even among the exemplars of BE storywriting. The only faults I can find are one or two occasions where a sentence's structure briefly interrupts the flow of the author's consciousness, but that is a subjective judgment. The grammar is perfect, even with some made-up onamatopoetic words (e.g., sproing). In almost every clause, the author executed impeccable aim and eventually carved a gem for us to savor. "The Boob Fairy" is a cornerstone example of a short story that develops its characters as much as a story of such length can hope.
Herb Delight, I hope you write more here. If you have stories distributed elsewhere, please help us find them!