cristinaprince@live.com
A city girl adjusts to fine country cookin'.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.14
- BE: 3.71
- Characters: 4.14
- Technical: 4.57
razaksroughnecks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic. Keep up the wonderful storyline!
Dee
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
realy great concept. One of the most promising begginings I've read in a long while. Please keep it up and give us a part 2!
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
What's gonna happen? Is Carmen gonna develop into a really big titted, wide hipped baby machine? Is father whatshisname ever gonna run out of musical dildoes? What the hell is this goop they're eating? Is this gonna develop into some clan/cult where all the men get arrested, the women get kicked out, and children get put into foster care? (just like real life!)
sonic_at
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good reading, interesting plot
Will we get more of it? (please ; ) )
scotesr
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Can't wait for the finish
ErikZ
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It doesn't seem finished?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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