The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Cristina Prince
Carmen In Church Country
A city girl adjusts to fine country cookin'.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fantastic. Keep up the wonderful storyline!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very enjoyable start!

Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

realy great concept. One of the most promising begginings I've read in a long while. Please keep it up and give us a part 2!

Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

What's gonna happen? Is Carmen gonna develop into a really big titted, wide hipped baby machine? Is father whatshisname ever gonna run out of musical dildoes? What the hell is this goop they're eating? Is this gonna develop into some clan/cult where all the men get arrested, the women get kicked out, and children get put into foster care? (just like real life!)

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good reading, interesting plot
Will we get more of it? (please ; ) )

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Can't wait for the finish

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It doesn't seem finished?

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