puffyjones@hotmail.com
After a very long time of not hearing from me I present to you my completed work of Two Friends. The story begins with two kids, Gen and Peter, who begin a new path in their life that they could have never imagined. Please Comment or E-mail me @ Puffyjones@hotmail.com about future stories or suggestions! Thank you!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.50
gts dreamer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Definitely one of my favorites. Grammar was not 100% perfect and the story sort of deflates at the end (perhaps another chapter is in the works?), but all in all what I really like to see in a BE/GTS story.
morefriction
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
You need to continue the story. At least one, maybe two more chapters.
momma
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
More please. keep it cuming!
wrrencher
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it, the only thing you need is to incrce the story mass.
Good story
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, you're right, there aren't many good slow growth mini-gts stories like this one
Keep it up!
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