All is not well in the sweat-drenched harems that are popping up around the country. A lonely, Shifter-exile discovers a menace to her world, and the pleasure of her Master. There will be orgies, gigantic boobs, and sexual urges to drive a man insane! (reformatted)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.00
SMAP
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Most of the above are simply placeholder values; while I've enjoyed your other stories, I found the formatting on this one (and the previous chapter) to be all but unreadable, to the point where I simply gave up. Perhaps it's some oddity of the file or my editor (MS WordPad, which makes it a little unlikely) doing something strange. I'm simply not prepared to spend the time nescessary to re-format the entire file in order to get any enjoyment out of it.
Unknown
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
while you did an okay job on the BE i wasn't overly fond of this piece. unfortunately i don't like many of the body shifters universe .
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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