The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

DDDave
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Abigail
A British schoolgirl with an ill-fitting uniform has her self-esteem improved by her teacher.
Average Scores:

BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Short and sweet.  Not really BE, and no sex.
brianm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

An absolute classic! Thanks!

Smash
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Superb! Considering the phrase, a picture is worth a thousand words; in the case of this story - I quite like the words and the mental pictures you create. Thank you.

BIG H
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

ITS ONE OF THE BEST STORYS OF HAVE COME ACROSS . I HOPE YOU DO MORE OF THIS STORY.

The Snake in the Empty Bottle
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I can not quite put my finger on it. I love this story. I need to find me such a goddess. Really good! Thank-you.

Irrelevent
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Engaging and tasteful, fantastic work.

Steve Jobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of my all time favorites.

Big dog
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

A pretty godd story overall

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