Madison continues in her adventure after having to change into a wish by anyone else. Please note, the first part of the story is in this file.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.29
- BE: 4.24
- Characters: 4.24
- Technical: 4.24
RevXXX
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, with some really good transformations. I am looking forward to a continuation and more stories from you. Cheers Dude, keep up the good work.
Mr F
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great story can't wait to see some more
Cleavage Hound
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love the Story the transformations are great the Charactros genuine dislike of her situation is wonderful. Please continure to long between updates
MrFreeZe
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great story but i would like to see another chapter or 2 or even three more. Just keep having Madison go through more shapes and ideas of mens fantasies but it would be cool to have pics. Just a thought but either than that great work.
fadriz
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The link to the story appears to be dead. I enjoyed the first one tremendously so hopefully it gets fixed quick.
claypool
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great story, I am a huge sucker for lip expansion so that got me going. Hope to see more in the future, maybe some sex but that doesn't really matter as you have great descriptions. Please keep writing!
Amix
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
A very enjoyable story. as someone above commented the constant victimization got a bit old towards the end, but otherwise i liked it a lot. nice transformations. keep them coming.
Merkitty
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I've seen these stories somewhere before... I don't know where but they may of even been on this site...either way still a good story...
McFawnJC
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Zinger, do not post stories in *.doc format unless you want people to be able to read private information of yours that's contained in them.
Use text instead.
Lockshockbear
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I absolutely loved it! I cannot wait to see some more. Also, I don't mind the lack of sex, and in fact I like it, so please, keep it how it is, I love seeing what kind of things will happen to her, it's great to read what all happens.
Excellent work!
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I agree with BenAdams1980, the constant hero/victim gets a little old, but very good descriptions and transformations.
ALD
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I love your story and cant wait to read more. Good job!
Very Free
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I was looking for a conclusion, not an abrupt end. Like, where's the sex?
BenAdams1980
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Although the TFs were great, the constant victimization grew kinda boring by the...what...fourth time it happened? Some variety in situation would be nice.
funfun74
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great job, I having been hoping for another installment. please keep writing.
Kflop
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Outside of the BE, the additional transformations were great! Keep writing!
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