The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

grotto
Two Become One
Sara Pinter is approached by a shapeshifter who has an unusual request.  This story was first posted on 4chan's /d/.  There are three chapters.
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xtra123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wish there was more to go along with this one...
cellss01
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

We need more stories like this one, great stuff grotto.

anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Do hope you decide to write more of this. It feels like it could become something really great.

Phill
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story! Please write more!!!

horse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

very good. please write more. the act being in complete self control is awesome

dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I rely like it i cant what for the next one plz rite it soon
there just isnt anof ppl riating stoys like this

None
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story! It feels like a great set-up for an amazing story. I hope you continue!

Moot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great start, but let's see some plot!

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