The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Emit a Time
A biochemist uses her boyfriend's time machine to go back and give herself bigger tits.
Average Scores:

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Really...a good starting plot but the forced "comical" situation and back and forward of chapter in senseless order completely ruined it...

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wasn't really good for what I wanted. It was a well written story, humourous at times, but a little disjointed.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It was really good but it could do with more description of the be!!!
I like the humour keep at it

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great work, great humor and varied descriptions of moments of BE.

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Too disjointed. Too many gaps for even a Memento-style method of plot development.

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