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The Overflowing Bra

PyroWildcat
Jeannie Dreams of Me - Part 3
As the hapless Jennifer discovers, not even being in public will stop Jeannie from having her sexily wicked way. .zip contains all previous parts of the story.
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pleasure4U
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Amazing story !

kwebec
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Really love the style of the story plus the be element.

cosmo
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Some of the best. please continue it!

Paul Gerard
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Unadulterated, uninhibited, inventive fun! I like it. :)
(I went with the average of previous techQ ratings because usually I don't notice any problems with grammar except when it hits me with a hammar. Hammer. Sorry ;)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great series. Please continue.

fads
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Fun. Are you planning to write more?

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