Five years after the events of part 2, Saphina the ex-priestess, and Dawnielle aka 5PH-1NX, her former sphinx goddess turned Morphing Alien Robotic Researcher, find themselves pitted against rogue grave robber/archaeologist Belinda "the witch with the whip" Carlyle, possessed by the brain of B1-TCH, the only ‘bot ever to turn psychotic. Will their determination and technology be a match for B1-TCH's thirst for world domination, and the ancient magic poisons that she has now learned to wield...?
The last part of the Temple Treat series is a 34.000 words wannabe epic including some more Altaerna universe background, boobs, fedora hats, peril-filled underground mazes, boobs, evil potions, morphing microbots out of control, boobs, explosions and a tearful farewell.
And boobs. :)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.80
Bodacious
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very nice! One of the most imaginative stories I've read in a loooong time. I hope we see more from you!
wuttha
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
just putting this here because of the all 1s rating...
sum yung gai
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A worthy end to the saga. Not as much body part description as one could hope for, but it definitely stands on its own as a story, not just whack-off material. I was sad to see the character farewells at the end.
Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story of epic proportions. Extra points for technical descriptions during BE. Due to consistencies in locations of errors (very few, BTW), I suspect that this story has more than one author.
elvis interuptus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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