A psuedo-fairy tale about a young woman becoming Queen of a land where the position is determined by breast size.
While it had a slow start and the mammogram bit was almost a deal-breaker, the overall story was very good with interesting characters and a solid plot device for the narrative to work with to keep us interested. Measurement system was a little confusing to begin with, but eventually the reader "gets it" and it ends up being left aside anyway with the broader descriptions later into the story. Remember to check your editing (quite a few simple mistakes), but all-in-all not bad work and a welcome submission.
I can't believe I never rated this. I liked the story quite a bit, although the beginning gets off to a bumpy start, compounded somewhat by the lengthy explanation of the measurement system. Once the stage is set, it flows nicely, as far as this reporter is concerned.
This story was REALLY well written, but I read it the way someone would read about teeth getting pulled. I had a lot of issues with the sizes mentioned.
Also, the mammogram thing. NOT. HOT. To women, mammograms are the equivalent of being kicked in the balls. A mammogram gone wrong where the breasts are squished to half an inch over a 3 foot range? That's getting kicked in the balls and then having someone hit them with a hammer.
I finished the story, but not very willingly. I love the writing style though, you are definitely more eloquent than the average BE writer.
One of the best I've read! Even better then Blind Date I think. I've got to say that the sexiest part was when Megan pulled Cassidy to her cleavage to make out.
I sincerely hope you write a sequel, and you should also consider having this version illustrated!
Great story! I only had two small problems: Cassidy passes out once she reaches what was probably around Megan's size, and we miss out on the majority of her expansion! The only other "problem" was that her tits went out sixteen feet in front of her, and sixteen feet to her sides, but they sloped down starting at her chest - that gave me a strange mental image of a weird pancake-type shape, since that would be a measurement of 16x16x5 or so, depending on how tall she is! However, I suppose that's more of a personal preference, and since it's a story I can imagine it any way I choose.
Anyway, this was a great story - we don't get enough excellent works in the "WOW" category, nor enough stories with girl-on-girl nipple fucking! Please, write more! Can't wait to see how big Megan gets.
Really enjoyed the story, but I found forty spelling/grammar errors. Initially I thought this was a dream sequence, but it turned out not to be (I think). It seems to me that if it wasn't then it didn't need to mysteriously start out with the beach, party etc. That's OK tho.
Absolutely awesome monster mammaries. IIRC, the size and weight were given as 16 feet and two tons. But we have to remember that the mass goes go up as the cube of the diameter. A ten foot (3 meter) diameter sphere of water has 15,000 liters and weighs fifteen tons -- and that's just one breast. No wonder the walls came tumbling down, with more than thirty tons of tits in the room!
Loved it!
One of my favorites in recent memory. Would love to see a sequel or more work from Chestnut.
excellent!! instant classic!
(misposted on questionaire, lol!)
That was great. I'd love to see another in this style
An excellent story, and it was a pleasure to read, with no glaringly noticeable grammar or spelling mistakes.
The only plausible criticism I can think of is that the story got off to a bit of an unsure beginning, but it quickly gain momentum and made up for it.
Excellent story. We want more!
Not much to say except excellent story! I loved it!
Truly, truly excellent. Looking forward to contination, and more stories. Have you written anything else?
Best story I have read in awhile. Your descriptions on the growth and how things change are great. Your main characters have similar yet unique personalities. All in all a great read.
An interesting story. Plenty of growth, milk and lactation! A welcome addition.
I really liked the style of this story. Excellent work all around.