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The Legend of Melanie grows, as does her flock. Could this be something more than just a chemical reaction? Could she really be a Goddess?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.57
- BE: 3.57
- Characters: 4.29
- Technical: 4.00
someguy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is a great story and I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment. I'm kind of a sucker for love stories. The characters in all of your stories are pretty realistic. Except they all have weird nicknames. I mean, Golem? Who would want to be called Golem?
tsokei
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Interesting characters but not heavily focused on the actual BE.
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
tsunami
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I have to say I like this, I like the idea of it and I think it's kind of sweet.
superdude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought this story was awesome. Excellent character development, and very erotic too.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I think that this series is extremely enjoyable. It hits on a lot of psychological things that make BE exciting. In addition, the choice of words and maturity of grammar make it seem very polished. I know I'm looking forward to more.
Duuude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
good idea for a story, but the execution is lacking. It is confusing especially earlier when you kept switching between Nathan and Tiger. Much of he time I didn't know what was going on. You need to set up each scene and tell the reader when the scene is switching. Also, your descriptions of the breasts actually growing are non-existent.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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