The Creature is back, and her high priestess is about to learn the hard way that tricking a goddess can inflate the ego in the short run, but letting her find out she's been duped for a decade may very well lead to other parts inflating out of control... or is there more to it than just painful revenge? (Part 2 of most likely 3)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.00
elvis interuptus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Vaelon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Well thought out and eminently likable.
sum yung gai
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A fascinating setting with some great descriptions, and I like the way the Sphinx thinks. Some English malapropisms, but they are easily forgiven.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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