What happens when Robin eats a Rumble Ball? BE of course!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.80
- BE: 2.60
- Characters: 2.60
- Technical: 3.20
HorseRadish
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A creative story, with good imagery.
Very Free
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Too short, and as someone else said, those of us who aren't into this stuff may not understand. But the author has my encouragement to continue with the story.
Thorgred
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
actualy the story is ok if you have watched the anime One Piece or have read the Manga otherwise it might be confusing
Munch Wolf
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
It appears to reference the anime series One Piece
Wild Card
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
I had a really hard time reading and following the story.
The names where odd and I could not quite follow all the events that took place.
Might be my skill in reading english, ... But I'm not so sure about that.
Never the less, its a story and stories keep this site alive.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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