Karen is a somewhat shy new girl getting used to life at college. After she begins taking a new birth control she finds over the weeks that she's begun to fill out her bras and her new friends begin to encourage more lustful behaviors. Part 1 spends a lot of time trying to develop the characters as best I can so it's a little lighter on the sex and changes than Part 2 will be. Much more intense situations to come.
Where did chapter 2 go??? STILL WAiTING
Great story! Love the growth. Can't wait to see chapter 2, and the rest of the story.
Ok, so personally i found this story to be a smashing hit, characters perfect, setting very nice, way of making her breasts grow LOVED IT, i am honestly dying to read part 2, please write, you are fantastic at this. Peace out everybody.
One of the better stories on here, can't wait for part two.
Absolutely Brilliant. Really hope you return to this one. Loved every moment.
I love the way you include vaginal expansion i your stories, please i know it has been a while but write part 2. Love it when the character is oblivious to whats is being done to them.
Great story, why haven't you written part 2 yet?
I notice you're still actively writing. I've read and re-read this one and was wondering if you would continue it.
Keep up the good work.
This story is in the top row maybe even my most favortite story if u could make the sex scenes more detailed this story would be flawless
I musta missed this one when it came out. Found it via the new Teenaged Dreams you posted. Where is part #2? I want more!
loved it, can't wait for the next part. Some sex with guys would be cool too, her libido being so extreme. maybe some growth for Lauren as well? I almost feel bad for Karen, with what Lauren's doing.
i liked it.if you continue maybe you could add some growth(taller).also have her have sex with some guys too.
Keep it up... anxiously waiting to read what happens next..!
Well written, slightly tl;dr but not bad especially for ppl with lots of time on their hands. If nothing else though there was excellent description and pacing in the growth itself and there was no glaring mistakes to distract from the story. I'm not going to ask that you continue because if you don't continue after all the comments you got below... well you must have your reasons.
I can't wait for the next one. You hit the right balance without walking a thin line.
Please write the second one soon!
Hurry with # 2
A+, top 20 BE story in my opinion.
This is great for a first-timer. Keep up the good writing!
The Sum is greater than the parts! Please keep the story up!!
You would be doing a dis-service to humanity if you didn't continue this amazing piece of work.
I love it man keep it up
great, keep it going
Good Stuff! Wanna see where this is going! More Please!
Better than many recent entries.
Very good first effort, with only minor tweaks needed for conventions.
the only other comment is that I do like sizes mentioned by letter.
Great job, cant wait for the next part
awesome! The best BE story I've read in ages!
I loved it and can't wait for part two. Give us an update in the forums on how it's going!
Great first story! Looking forward to the next part.
Love the slow growth aspect. Takes its time. Almost reads like a GTS story (like GTS too!)
Do continue writing...Thanks!
Very nice. Hope there's a part two!
One of the best part one's I've read...but really, please don't get sucked into making part 2 weird, stick to the simple stuff.
Anyway, this was quite a professional job, well paced, good grammar etc. and good character development and likeability.
The first story that compelled me to comment.
nice
Great story!
I am eagerly awaiting round two. Great stuff!
G-man001 is right on the ball. Great story with hopefully more growth for the main as well as the supporting friends. Also added a fellow could be an added bonus.
Very well written, and kept me quite interested. I definitely look forward to a part two. :)
Awesome! Keep going, my friend, keep going!
Looking forward to the second installment!
Some real talent here
Good plot, keep it running!!
Technically quite good; didn't notice anything my first read through, though there could have been some minor stuff. You broke the story up quite well and the sex scenes were spaced out enough that everything didn't just blend together into a blur of random fornication.
I liked everything so far; F/F is slightly unusual here (appearantly), but more than welcome. You seem to have a good idea where you're going with this, so I'm looking forward to seeing more in the future. Good luck!
Please, please PLEASE write more. You have a real talent and this story demands to be finished.
Keep up the good work.
WOW dude wow. Keep writing, i love your style!
Sweet jesus great story!!! Cant wait for part 2!
Excellent story. Very well written, i was able to get into the story and connect with the characters right away, which is a first. Continue the good work, and I'm looking forward for more
AWESOME!!!!
AWESOME story, Can't wait for the next part. Keep up the pace :-D
can't wait for part 2
do another! so good!
Friggin awesome! I love the gradual to rapid changes and laurens reactions to them.
Ready for round 2 already!
very nice! good set up. don't rush it. looking forward to ch. 2
Really great work. Just a little more describing of size her breast please :)
keep it up
Very wonderful. This part had just enough heat to keep me coming back. What I want to know is, why do the girls give Karen more of the pills to see what happens instead of taking the pills themselves? :) Just a thought. A FF story is a new touch around here, but I hope some lucky guy gets to try her new libido. Keep up the great work and don't, don't, don't make this your only posting.
very good; looking forward to the next chapter
awesome...
One of the better stories we've seen here in awhile, keep it up.
Very well written! Good character development too.
awesome, can't wait for more!