I have re-written and added to my original work, expanding some of the descriptions as suggested and adding another chapter. A man named John unwittingly follows a GPS device onto a side road that takes him to The Gilded Rose, his life will never be the same. Hope you enjoy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.27
- BE: 4.09
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.82
Koyie
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Of the paonlpy of website I've pored over this has the most veracity.
Daiyuki
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
A rewrite and you still don't know it's spelled gilded..
Drow
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
The remaining characters remain a huge tease in its unfinished state.
Wood
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Please finish this story.
jaked122
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
i just didn't fit the bill
HeliumGirl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Ewe knead two cheque watt yore spell checker tells ewe. :)
dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
DarkPhoenix
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Love the story. Can't wait for more. Please remember just because its spelled correctly does it make it the right word. Saw 'though' that should have been 'thought' a couple of others
D
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great enhancement to the original. Looking forward to more.
Jason G
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I will admit that I only vaguely remember your original posting, but this time it left much more of an impression. An excellent story so far. Very creative, and really leaves me wanting more, so don't quit!
buddyu
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I like your work and am hoping for more.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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