This story is about a bizarre health class and the consequences of it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 3.40
- Characters: 3.40
- Technical: 3.20
Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This set of stories would benefit greatly from some good proofreading before being published. Otherwise a great set of stories. Keep up the good work.
bill
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Kanodin
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Once you get past the abundant and fixable spelling errors, the story was interesting. The author should make the "processes" longer and more detailed, because often the reader is left wondering, "Wait--What just happened?"
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I actually really enjoyed this story. I wish all the expansions were a bit more detailed, but I'm just picky.
Keep it up!!
A_W
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This is a decent breast expansion and rapid pregnancy story. Even though I found the story flowed a little less than smoothly, and slightly lacking in details, it was still and enjoyable read.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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