The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Happyguy
happyguyprime@yahoo.com
Abducted
Happyguy returns with a hilarious satire about writing BE stories. I mean, a true story about how he was abducted by aliens. I mean, a thought-provoking probe into our shared fetish. I mean... what the hell do I mean?
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Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Weird story. It really didn't get good til about halfway through the story. I loved the butt expansion, though.

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