The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Hell-Scythe
Power: Day 7
Jade finally gets her papers to leave the house.  After a quick bit of shopping, she gets to go to school for at least the end of the day.
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 EtherealVision
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I absolutely love this story, I can't wait till the next installment, and hope the story never ends
 Vladizdead
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Wow, Wow, Wow!!!
 DHoose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Excellent as always sir.
You sure are making quite a few characters, will you be able to balance them all?  And how about Susan and Janet?
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