Tony, Jason, and Cam are enjoying a night out in the aftermath of Tony’s break-up with his girl when Tony finds himself the master of a Genie. A Genie who’ll do anything to please him… even turn herself into a bimboslut.
But, of course, Kerry has to get herself involved.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.75
GreenRebel
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great work! I love this character and setting. Please please please write more!
Anony Mouse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Will there be more Kerry stories soon?
Moop
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Still my favorite...I just wonder if anyone read this one.
opailopai
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It worked well on pretty much every level, nice length some good humour the only sticking point would be that you placed that strange scene at the start and it only sort of fits in later. Keep writing.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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