The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Kerry: Pub Night

Laura’s had a bad day at work and so has Kerry, so when they meet at the bar they find they have a few things in common. Things like long legs, hot bodies, huge tits, insatiable bisexual appetites, and absolutely no inhibitions.

Which is funny since Laura and her friends used to think of her as being somewhat dull and very mousy.

Average Scores:

Squishy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

LOVED the Monty Python reference.

bobwhite
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I'm giving you a 4 on one just so I won't look like I'm padding your score. Great stuff, Bill!

mistuh s.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

bill pratt you clever basterd! hats off to you, mr. pratt! hats off to you.

mickg10
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Loved it.

aryanman
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

i thought the story was good, i like how the girl became a cumslut, it just needed more connection to the characters, more description on the BE, and some other things to make it more enjoyable...maybe you could make her mind change when her boobs grow in the bimboization process. because a bimbo wouldn't second guess giving a blowjob, but over all a pretty good story.

Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Seems to me that the story took an abrupt turn and left the story of the 'nerd', who was mentioned at the beginning. I hope it will resume in the future. I'd like more BE, yeah, but why should it have to have TG?

Dranon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent as always, this series has really been great. I'm a big fan of bimboization, so this one was especially great. I just wish there was a bit more detail in the BE (and more of it!). Some TG would be awesome too, this series is BEGGING for it.

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