Seven short stories about growing breasts and the women attached to them.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.60
- BE: 3.40
- Characters: 3.40
- Technical: 3.00
Kam
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Aside from some grammar issues, a very nice collection
Chas3
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is a decent collection but why repost other peoples work?
Squishy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The stories were actually quite good.
Rename all the "txt" file extensions to "rtf" to get them to work right, or simply open them in in any program that'll read Rich Text. A point deducted for the hassle.
Snotling
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I think this is posted in some sort of Mac Os file type, could it be converted to something else that the other 95% of the planet can read easily?
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Every one of these stories is pretty good. You cover alot of different transformations and tastes. Each story has good characterization and plot. The only bad thing is the funky formatting, i had to copy and paste them into word to read them.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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