Gloria keeps getting packages in the mail with new clothing that changes everything about her life.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 3.20
- Characters: 3.70
- Technical: 3.40
Mango Tree
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story. Very hot. Excellent pacing.
godofwar5000
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed how the story and character slowly changed over the week, and the use of the events of one day being a chapter. Well-written and thoroughly enjoyed.
jaxon401
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought the descriptions and characters were great, as well as the overall theme. I was in fact hoping for more - bigger boobs, Claire getting some "Packages," maybe some of the students. The BE was mostly sidelined and almost an afterthought.
Jato
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
great story, you got good talent but
i find the BE description lacking, and spread out too far in the story, and text is good...but word is much better
beaner
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Very hot story. Kept me "up" for a long time.
Adama
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's a lot easier to read where it was previously posted, at the MC Story Arhive: http://www.asstr.org/~mcstories/ChangeInStyle/index.html
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Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Cold Dragon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I feel that this is probably one of the best stories I have read in quite a while, up there with the original RUMOR MILL.
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please ignore my previous review, I was a bit angry at the time.
Please try harder next time though, as the format isn't too great on the eyes.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I'm not sure you could have made the format any more annoying.
I lost interest by the time I hit the third sentence of the first file. Why not take up knitting instead of butchering English?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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