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The Overflowing Bra

It's Always Time Act Four: Food for Thought
"Why?" Dee rose. "Why can't you help?" Tomoe shrugged and opened her mouth but this time Dee knew exactly what was coming and cut her off. "And don't just say 'rules,' or 'I lost the manual,' or some other bullshit. Galatea tried to get us the Disney lovey-dovey ending and I fucked it up. I gave away the nanomek. Now there's this three hundred pound, chocolate cherry psycho-bitch running around, kidnapping my girlfriend, mindfucking skank-bots and killing and eating people in some elaborate scheme to take over the world just because she thinks I don't pay enough attention to her." 
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Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

Cool! That's a clveer way of looking at it!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

umm, ok, where to begin. i read alot of pron fic. alot from this website. most i must say are mundane and remind me of fantasies i had when i was 13. this story however is actually that, a story. it has plot, character development ( ;) ), and really, REALLY descriptive sex and lots of it. Allusions even. i believe taht this is the definition of what Epic Porn Fiction should be. Detailed, well-written, and addictive. (ok, maybe not the last one, but it would be a plus)

Very free
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Just a few spelling errors and a few missing words. I agree with Pobblebonk. Not much BE, or as in the case with the other episodes, detailed, outrageous fuckfests. But it's an adventure worth reading, even if it's quite long. And it's not ended yet. I despair over these bluntly terminated chapters, because I've come across several with a similar unfinished ending, only to find that the story is several years old and apparently nothing has since been done to finish it. So I remain impatiently awaiting the next installment...

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

"Its over nine thousand!" fuck i laughed.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Now, I'm not usually in the habit of rating these stories. Perhaps I'm simply a lurker that way; reading, not writing; absorbing and retaining, not excreting, if that would be a little more in-line with the gooey theme. In fact, without a doubt I wouldn't be writing these comments had I not stumbled over a particular paragraph. I can assure you that I nearly physically stumbled over it; truly, it nearly broke me, waves of horror washing over me. Fear permeates my every action and thought now; I now routinely glance over my shoulder from time to time, just in case my terrifying, gibbering thoughts might be affirmed. And so, I must brave both my agraphic nature and my blood-chilling paranoia to ask a simple question, a question that perhaps will answer what I need to know about this sentence:

'Eurydice's appearance woke the lavender girl out of her horny reverie. "Jesus Christ, it's a lime, get in the car!"'

Are you writing these stories *specifically* for me?

I ask this question while bearing in mind that an affirmative answer will simply raise more questions, but I believe it's an important one. Re-reading the other three for background, I can't help but twinge now over every literary reference, every piece of your well-crafted mythology falling into place, every morphic-monster movie reference (John Carpenter's "The Thing"? "Legend of the Overfiend"? You bastard, how did you get into my DVD collection?) without glancing hurriedly about my living room, hoping (or dreading) to catch you dashing behind furniture. Have you been stealing my laptop in the dead of night, looking up my favorite stories to play some twisted Frankenstein game with Sobek's realistic characters and Bill Pratt's fantastic pacing? Although if you've name-dropped Lovecraft as a Lime Guy because of those Call of Cthulhu books lying around, I'm only holding those for a friend. Honestly.

If you *are* simply catering to me with these tailor-made tales, however, I'd like to assure you that it doesn't have to be on such a strange topic, or even involve pornography at all. I do not have a goo fetish, my enjoyment of your stories notwithstanding. Indeed, I don't have a breast-expansion fetish either; I simply come here for the ladies that result (although if you're patient one day, do try explaining that to a significant other who's taken an errant peek at your browser history). I'd read your work in any other setting, concerning any other topic of classical Greek mythology, or indeed any other subject at all, so it surprises me that you'd put it here.

Obviously I'm sorry if this secret I've discovered was purposely kept hidden from me, but if putting in the sentence in question was supposed to be the final clue in an entertaining puzzle, then I hope I've done admirably in decoding it.

I look forward to the fifth, perhaps final, chapter.


You may come out from behind my couch now.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Goddamn amazing story going on here. Not so much BE in this one but wow, the characters are coming to life. Things are happening in the background that make we want to come back and read this is a proper story, never mind the erotic content!

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