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The Overflowing Bra

Miracle Grow V
Back from break.  Here is the next chapter of Miracle grow.  Things begin to turn a bit.  If anyone has ideas about where the story should go or things they want to see, tell me.  e-mail or comments, they really do help.  happy reading.
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Rapier's Stab
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

First off, let me say this is some crazy shit! Not that that's a bad thing in and of itself, though. The only real criticism that I have is that, in the wake of all the weird goings-on, the character's are falling apart (no pun intended). You described some neat characters at the start of the series, I'd like it if something of that stuck around.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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