This is my first story, hope you like it
In Mr. Switzer's world you do what he says, how he says, and when he says it, even if you don't know you're doing it.
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Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.75
crazysly
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
awesome read and a little more BE and all is great can't wait for the sequel
xarinth
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
This is a very good start. I would like to see where this is going, and can't wait for your next installment.
Anon
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Proofread your work. It's "warehouse" and some sentence structure was off. All that said, though, I would like to read a little more just to see what is really going on.
flackerns
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
well written but needs more sex and more boobs
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