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A sex vampire bites a boy and turns him into a cum-thirsty vampire girl as well.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.00
Frank
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
The story could use a bit of work in terms of grammar. As for the story itself, it could be interesting, but it is bogged down by the fact that it has no focus. It tries to give each character a bit of description and attempts to incorporate many different details, but ultimately fails to do any of them justice.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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