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The 3rd part of Sexified.
Rachel attempts to seek out those behind the experiment that turned the nerdy secretary into a sex goddess! More wild sex and transformations await her…
Please rate and comment! File contains parts I, II and III.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.50
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 1.50
Dissappointed
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
I agree. It seems like this part was rushed. A poor conclusion to what started out great.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
The story had a lot of potential, but you seemed a little too rushed to get to the end. The third part was especially bad since you kept using "she" or "her" so it was a little hard to tell which female you were talking about.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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