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The Overflowing Bra

SkeetSkeet
skeetskeetbe@yahoo.com
Saw II (BE Version): House of Horrors
Sequel to my first Saw BE-type story.  The mysterious woman captor claims another set of victims, causing them to expand to enormous proportions for her own personal enjoyment.  Can she be stopped or will she live to inflate others for another day?  Not gruesome per se, but definitely not for those looking for a love story. 3rd attempt at a story, hope you enjoy!
Average Scores:

Dreginy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

much better then the first! the BE was alot bigger, and there was AE in this one as well. is there gonna be a 3rd?

bioman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Whens the next one?

DASQ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Make More!!!!!!

You rock!!!

horror
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

really verry good. i would definatly like another one

Reiko Hentai
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Please do more. Its better than life~! ^_^

Mike
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

One of the best I've read. Please continue writing them.

SheepSkin
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very good work, definily keep it up. especially liked the extensive BE

daimonBE
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

SkeetSkket: Great story, I thought it was well thought out and well written. Overall, the story (and some BE scenes) seemed to proceed too fast... Maybe I was just really in to the story.

All in all, I really like the non-consential/punishment theme, and I especially liked the AG. Definiately keep it up; I can't wait for the next installment!!!

D64
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I have to say.... I REALLY LIKED THIS ONE. Please continue the series!!!!

Satudo
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Better then the first saw by several jumps, I especially liked the underwater scene. Forcing the woman to grow or die and then after all that flinging her back in with an even heavier anchor. Of the six seperate cases that by far was the best example of induced dispair. Especially as the myserious torturous tied the new anchor on, it gave it a much more personal touch.

John
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Congratulations on another well done story. I tried to send you a email direct but your account has been disabled-email me if you want more comments.

Leviathan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

I love this series and hope to see more. The concept is perfect for more sequels. I would love to see more character development and plot. The sequences should be more drawn out.

Trinity
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This has got to be one of my favorite BE stories, especially with the ass expasion. I hope to see more soon!

Wile_E
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story! Just as good as the first, if not better! Here's a thought, for the next chapter, how about punishing one of the web watcher males with some MPG? Maybe something he can't handle? Just a thought.

ice0wl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

It's pretty rare to find a story with ass expansion these days, and you did a pretty good job with that, not to mention the rest of the story. Carrying off the tease is the important part, and this story is loaded with it and done rather well.

BigTittyLova
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

"B-E-A-utiful" the only way i can describe it

zaero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Better than the first installment. And thank you for adding ass expansion, more of that please and to bigger sizes for the next one >:-)

Halfelf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was a very well written story. Thanks for taking the time to not only make it readable, but enjoyable as well.

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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great.

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