first part of a story, this will be my last attempt at trying to break into professional writing of BE based
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.43
- BE: 3.14
- Characters: 3.57
- Technical: 2.57
deedee
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
i did not under stand it at all.
hi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
man this is the best stories iv reed on this site it has every thing iv bin looking for plz mack the next one i cant wait!!
Adama
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Is there going to be more of this story? I want to see what happens next...
Devon boy D. (author)
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
a message for "Kendra",
If you e-mail me, i'll write you your own BE story
joce
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Enjoyable though, at times, not easy to follow what is happening.
Kendra
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I'm enjoying the story so far, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next chapter.
PO
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Good detail. Not as much as I like normally. But a good story none the less. Just need to get the grammar down. Because frankly, its terrible at the moment.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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