grenshaw500@yahoo.com
A BE superquickie in which Annie suddenly finds her breasts growing in the middle of the night for no reason. May be the beginning of a miniseries if people like it enough.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.27
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.09
- Technical: 4.45
Dreginy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
pretty damn good, i'd like 2 see more of these kind of stories.
Jay
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A great start to a great series! Keep it up Grenshaw!
ThunderBird
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Carry on with the series! We _eagerly_ await new episodes
FloaterBabe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved it! More like it please!
boobman4life
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The Story was a great laugh, but way too Improbable, a small dose of reality is good in stories to me but not to the point where you loose track of your imagination
Lburns
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed the story. It would've been 5's all across the board if the expansion was a few paragraphs longer, rather than a quick blurb and then a short description, was very well written and is a great start for a short story, definitely keep up the good work!
infinitii
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
e
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
digg
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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