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The Overflowing Bra

Bigby Wolfe
VENUS: Venus in Somnia
Alexa and her roommate Becky don't get much sleep; a mysterious cabal is shadowy; and Michelle meets a man.
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 MaxBigfoot
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A promising beginning, I'm looking forward to seeing more.  I hope this doesn't turn into the typical 'superheroines in peril' fetish story.
It's going to be interesting to see how she uses her powers in a superheroic fashion.
 Grayface
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
	I liked Chapter 1 & 2 a LOT! I was kinnda' afraid at first, I thought you were gonna turn her into a bimbo, I don't like those kind of stories, but you didn't. I eagerly await more chapters.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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