Fan Fiction with Jennifer Love Hewitt and Jennifer Lopez.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
tsokei
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent work! I didn't notice any glaring grammar issues, and the plot was really pretty good. I felt that character development could have used a little work and that the expansion description was cut short too early, but that just goes to show how good it was. ^_^
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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