The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Eliot Cayne
Cori's Mistake 2: Electric Boogaloo
Corlisant, the ditzy witch girl, imbues a woman's tazer with a BE spell.
Average Scores:

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Real nice post, i hope you keep posting stuffs like this, thumbs up.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very entertaining. You didn't take too long in getting to the action. Sequel, please!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very well written and funny story. Awesome be description and attention to detail. Light-hearted and fun, just a great read. I hope you're still writing!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

the best story on this site— not a thing wrong with it

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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