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Linda and her friends piss off Damion, a Warlock, and are transformed.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 2.25
Soy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I realy enjoyed this story. It was right up my alley with the TG and multiple breasts. Other than the grammatical problems I give this story 2 huge thumbs up.
Melias
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
you got a lot of the characters names wrong. you messed up who was who way too much. you need to proofread it. if you did that it would be a good story.
Ferieda
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Sorta good plot-wise. Needs serious work with grammar, though spelling was pretty accurate. Always remember, sentences start with a capital letter, so do names, and dialogue goes in quotes and also should have the first letter capitalised. Sorry, I'm really picky about basic grammar and punctuation... But I hope this helps you to improve.
xxxecil
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Needs work grammatically, and with some descriptions, but the sex was very enjoyable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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