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Shannon finds a magazine ad with a phone number that gives her bigger breasts when she calls it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.25
Scitenik
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love the concept, especially the mishap with the phone call at the end, though I wish it hadn't turned out to be just a dream.
Pleasure
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I liked it a lot, Indeed short and sweet !
I can still imagine them growing...
Thanks !
Biantai
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent short story! This one could have gone on longer and still been very interesting throughout.
Toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
The BE was nice, but the sizes got a little confusing- I was having trouble seeing her resting her head on basketball-sized breasts.
Short and sweet, but fun. I will probably read more by you in the future.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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