Fred Murphy finds a Device. A wishing Device, more accurately. And what he wishes for...well, you can guess that.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.11
- BE: 3.22
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 4.00
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Stumbled across this. Awesome!
Roger
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Pretty good story. I will look for more of your stories. Thanks.
IceOwl
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Not much to it, and it seems like the BE was tacked on as an afterthought. Nice try, though.
katheb
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
quite nice quite nice indeed
cjpos
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I thought this was a fairly good story. The movements of the characters a either bit slow or fast.
buddyu
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
decent story, will it continue?
K
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I usually don't like short stories but that one was pretty fun.
chose_bine
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Short. Well told, even if story flow is akward. Good job.
BEman
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nice job man. Great story.
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