Ryan's not quite ready for business to "grow" like this.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 4.80
katheb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bloody ell maw
This is lovely
you got a good thing going here .
and a cliffhanger !your killin us
great work
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it. Cant wait for more.
someguy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What are you doing writing smut? While I love your submissions, they are fantastic, you seem to have some serious skill. Do you write professionally? Regardless, great job and I hope you stick around.
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
One of the best stories I've read in a while. Please make more!
cmdr_mark@hotpop.com
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it right proper. Great job. I think the change in Audrey's character was a bit sudden but I loved Gina and Jenna's characters.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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