grenshaw500@yahoo.com
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.00
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 2.75
- Technical: 3.50
NotYourCharacters
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
You're better off doing original work.
nobody
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Fairly short. A good setup. Interested to see where you go with it. The single scene of enlargement was pretty neat - I also like how the lead character has a means of dealing with enlarging too far. However, the characters are fairly flat and not much is done with them. Obviously I hope you had permission to continue the previous story. If not, shame on you.
Elvis Interuptis
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
ten thousand calories would only add about 2 or 3 cups.
The fact that I noticed that shows that I wasn't really in the story.
EI
DarkHeart
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Not badly written, but it did seem fairly flat and the story seemed to end abruptly when it could have gotten going.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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