A girl tries out a device that puts on the pounds in all the right places. But when her stepmother does the same, she finds not one but two unlikely new partners.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.64
- BE: 3.36
- Characters: 3.29
- Technical: 3.71
JERRY
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've been checking this website on and off for over 2 decades. This story has been and will always be my number 1. It's not the best written but the images it gives you. The thoughts it provokes. 5 stars all around for that.
Jerry
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this story so much! It has gotten me into a good place so many times I could barely finish reacding it
Starlite
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved every bit, the ending was amazing.
BE Lover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I loved this story. It actually gives me ideas of my own for stories. If I was a writer that is.
Mr. Consensual
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
If a story contains nc, mark it as nc. I don't read nc, and stopped reading this story when it crossed this territory.
While there was certainly plenty of BE, if there was much detail, I apparently missed it due to reeling from the disconnect between the purported BE mechanism and the effect - I basically just got that they were really big and sensitive.
I have a particular dislike for characters who don't read instructions, being in tech support, though not as much as for characters who barge into their daughter's bedroom and rape her.
Rufus
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Uh......better luck next time
Darnel
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Enjoyed the ideas for the BE, the belt was nice touch. Very descriptive on many of the parts of the story. NC was a suprise but didn't detract too much, i mean it is a story afterall! Good stuff, wouldn't mind seeing a sequel since we got left hanging at the end there!
nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Ridiculously smutty. That's a good thing.
As noted, nonconsensual elements should be marked as such, I marked down your technical quality a full point for that. If you're going to miss a tag, DON'T miss that one.
Not much in the way of characterization to get in the way of the sex.
A good start, I'd like to see more from this author.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The bit between father and daughter was somewhat offputting, but I did like the "revenge" at the end.
Dinner
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
The writing style was nothing particularly stellar, nor were the characters, really. The twist at the end amused me, but the content failed to get my attention. The BE was lacking in description—I like to hear more about what the characters do to the breasts, as well as the way the breasts are clothed and the way they alter the overall shape of the character's body. It's pretty common for a TG to T.F. "himself," but this *is* the first I've seen where it was a lecherous FATHER. Bravo for a shock factor, but you need to work on your description. (I also agree with Mr. Consensual about how much of a disappointment it was that Tiff didn't read the instructions. I have more of an issue with forgetful naïvété than I do with unlabeled NC.)
Quadhouse
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Your Name Here
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Basic premise of story-ok 6/10
Female on Female Scene-Unexpected, 4/10
Thinking it erotic for a man to rape his daughter-disturbed, 0/10
Rest of story-Unread.
All in all the story was ok until it derailed my intrest.
The Farscaper
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I loved this story. I am not a big fan of instant BE or AG but this story was excellent. The way things went from nothing to gigantic, wow. #1 story IMO
Rate-tor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I didn't like the Incest but this story ROCKED!
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